Radiant as the sun in spring
She walked in, the girl who made love out of nothingness
Asked how she looked, I replied
“Better than all the rest”
She says I haven’t seen anyone else
“I know”
Shining brighter than the stars
She’s walking in, hair up, makeup on, wearing a green dress
Asking how she’s looking, I’m replying
“Better than all the rest”
She says I haven’t looked at anyone else
“I know”
Luminescent like the moon
She walks in, white T, no makeup, and hair a mess
Asks how she looks, I reply
“Better than all the rest”
She says I saw everyone else
“… I know”
©2008-2009 ~the-boy-with-a-coin
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Does she?
..does she what?
I really like this poem
I know you have it in you, so you should
write more often methinks!
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This was not my idea
Thanks though! I think I just might!
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True Love Still Exists
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This was not my idea
~Chels
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DanceYourHeartOut
I really liked to hear that.
Thank you!!
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..omg.. sorry sorry sorry.. that was a really really baaad pun.. im going to stop now before i actually jump in the hole i just dug. ^^ great job though.
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DanceYourHeartOut
No worries. I like "bad" jokes because, well, I make them all the time.
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True Love Still Exists
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